I’m a long time regular here so I would like to weigh in on this too. I enjoy all kinds of captions and have submitted a whole bunch myself (not lately admittedly, but I will eventually again). That being said, I do think that it’s best to have discussions of nudity in the captions because isn’t that kind of the whole point of the page? Exploring what it’s like to be naked all the time in a PN Universe? It’s fun to have lots of different types of captions and stories, but I think the nudity of the subject in the pic should at least be addressed in passing. Just my two cents.
Question for all of you. What are your thoughts on captions like this that describe the situation a naked person is in, but don’t actually relate to nudity in any way?
Not to be rude to anyone, but I overall think Mariner77’s captions could use some work. They are often overly long and convoluted (sometimes feel like multiple caption ideas put into one image), have a serious lack of conjuctions (most sentences start with “I”, so they are very awkward to comfortably read and it takes you out of the experience), and overall don’t seem to fit the writing style of the rest of the captioned images on this blog (moreoften than not it’s naked girls describing their extreme desire to expose their body parts in unnecessary detail).
I don’t want anyone to feel bad, but with so many captions being from Mariner77 I would like to give some feedback:
Ask yourself if your caption contains too many details and stories, and could it be split up into multiple captioned images?
Google “conjuctions” to find some examples so you can work them into your captions. I understand English is not everyone’s native language, but I think a Google search to these words could be a first step to include them in your writing and overall improve your stories.
Try to make your characters feel human. People on this blog already suspend their disbelieve when they read about people willingly living their lives in modern society completely naked. It is already very unreal and thrilling to imagine people walking around naked, exposed to a society filled with phones and cameras. That they’re accepting to face all the inconveniences that come with 24/7 permanent nakedness. And that many of them choose to practice newdiquette to force themselves to feel less shame. So reading about women who act like their only goal in life is for people to see every wrinkle of their vulva is unnecessarily extra. Things were already crazy enough before that. And it crosses the line between “suspended disbelieve” and “absurdity”.
Believe me, I love some of Mariner77’s captions. They come up with some amazing ideas and concepts, but sometimes the execution is a little lacking and doesn’t fit this block in my eyes. Seeing the caption in this post, it makes me think that Mariner77 is a passionate writer, who probably loves to write about anything – not just nudity. But a blog like this just doesn’t mix well with long texts. People want to read a few sentences and have a new idea put into their head to fantasize about. Mariner77 honestly should try to write a book about whatever subject they please, so they can finally let out their writing ambition as much as they want with no limits. And in my opinion try to keep the submissions to this blog a tiny bit more compact.
Again, I don’t mean to be rude. But this has become very noticable to me lately, and I hope some people who read this comment can grow from this feedback. And I absolutely want Mariner77 to continue submitting.
Naked girls describing their extreme desire to expose their body parts are some of my absolute favorite captions, and “reading about women who act like their only goal in life is for people to see every wrinkle of their vulva” is why I finally created an account to participate in this community instead of just lurking.
Unfortunately I’m not able to use Discord currently but if I could speak to Mariner77 directly I would implore him or her to double down on the “absurdity” because some of us love it very much, and would hate for it to stop just because someone felt the need to complain.
Aw, well if Mariner77 is reading the replies here then I hope he or she knows how much I enjoy those so-called crazy captions and, as someone who has very lewd exhibitionist fantasies of her own, I hope to see more of them. ❤
I am not on Discord. Thanks for the comments, especially the positive ones. I know that some of the text is often very long but it is only because there is too much to say. I try to keep it short but it gets away from me. I know that the quality of my submissions varies, but I do try. I will continue to submit what I feel I should whether it is absurd or not, if you don’t like it ignore it. I don’t think the model always has to mention their nudity. If they don’t say they are PN just assume they are.
I feel like it should relate to nudity at least in a subtle manner. The idea of not acknowledging it has merit in that it creates the fantasy of this being a normal everyday thing. But it can’t be irrelevant thematically. But there has to be a sense that the nudity makes the story being told different.
Like maybe this could have been about a registered girl who’s longing for a sense of normalcy despite her voluntarily flouting social norms. She doesn’t have to say it explicitly, but it could be clear that it is what’s going on.
Is not the goal of PN to become a society that nudity is common and no longer a topic of conversation? I believe this caption brings that part of the PN-universe alive. Admittedly, replace the good looking model with an ogre, and my opinion would flip in a heartbeat.
Shouldn’t there be people in teh PN-universe who simply go about their daily lives, but simply without clothing? Not a big deal to them. They are naked, but life continues.
As to the length, NWO used to have stories without images posted now and then. Some quite enjoyable from the standpoint of letting the mind create the images for each individual reader.
I don’t think I ever had stories without images, actually, but I did some with a single image “to set the scene” and significantly more text than would fit in a caption.
I actually really like it. I think for newbies they’d talk about being naked all the time, but for people who are actually permanently naked, it’s just another day. They couldn’t possibly just constantly talk about being naked all the time, could they?
I think it makes the world more fun and believable, and hope to see more!
I read the caption before seeing any of the comments and the way I’d interpreted it was seeing her naked now and looking back at what’s changed I took “my past” as implying a “clothed” past which is fast disappearing since she registered. For me, the protagonist doesn’t always have to say “Hey, I’m naked. Zooming in on her breasts and lady garden before I started to read the caption told me that already.
If the caption doesn’t say anything about the girl’s nudity and her nudity isn’t even mentioned, then the girl’s nudity is kind of…pointless. It would have the same meaning if it was just a regular clothed girl. Captions like that just aren’t very interesting to me. It’s like when you read a story about a naked girl, but the text never elaborates on the sensation that she has in being naked, like the ground or floor on her bare feet, the wind on her butt, how noticeably her boobs bounce, how her nipples go hard at the most inopportune times, etc. Nor does it say anything about how other people react to her nudity. It’s so bland and banal that the character might as well not be naked in the first place.
I have to completely disagree with TLNC. I love these sort of captions where the nudity is there but not specified – you get to use your imagination to build out the story of why they are naked. The exhibitionist screaming look at me (like the recent “Amusement Park 1” http://nudeworldorder.net/blog/31164 /) and the detailed anatomical descriptions are the captions that I enjoy the least, to me they are the boring ones.
For me the best captions are the ones that give you a starting point for you to construct your own fantasy on top of.
I’m a long time regular here so I would like to weigh in on this too. I enjoy all kinds of captions and have submitted a whole bunch myself (not lately admittedly, but I will eventually again). That being said, I do think that it’s best to have discussions of nudity in the captions because isn’t that kind of the whole point of the page? Exploring what it’s like to be naked all the time in a PN Universe? It’s fun to have lots of different types of captions and stories, but I think the nudity of the subject in the pic should at least be addressed in passing. Just my two cents.
Question for all of you. What are your thoughts on captions like this that describe the situation a naked person is in, but don’t actually relate to nudity in any way?
Not to be rude to anyone, but I overall think Mariner77’s captions could use some work. They are often overly long and convoluted (sometimes feel like multiple caption ideas put into one image), have a serious lack of conjuctions (most sentences start with “I”, so they are very awkward to comfortably read and it takes you out of the experience), and overall don’t seem to fit the writing style of the rest of the captioned images on this blog (moreoften than not it’s naked girls describing their extreme desire to expose their body parts in unnecessary detail).
I don’t want anyone to feel bad, but with so many captions being from Mariner77 I would like to give some feedback:
Ask yourself if your caption contains too many details and stories, and could it be split up into multiple captioned images?
Google “conjuctions” to find some examples so you can work them into your captions. I understand English is not everyone’s native language, but I think a Google search to these words could be a first step to include them in your writing and overall improve your stories.
Try to make your characters feel human. People on this blog already suspend their disbelieve when they read about people willingly living their lives in modern society completely naked. It is already very unreal and thrilling to imagine people walking around naked, exposed to a society filled with phones and cameras. That they’re accepting to face all the inconveniences that come with 24/7 permanent nakedness. And that many of them choose to practice newdiquette to force themselves to feel less shame. So reading about women who act like their only goal in life is for people to see every wrinkle of their vulva is unnecessarily extra. Things were already crazy enough before that. And it crosses the line between “suspended disbelieve” and “absurdity”.
Believe me, I love some of Mariner77’s captions. They come up with some amazing ideas and concepts, but sometimes the execution is a little lacking and doesn’t fit this block in my eyes. Seeing the caption in this post, it makes me think that Mariner77 is a passionate writer, who probably loves to write about anything – not just nudity. But a blog like this just doesn’t mix well with long texts. People want to read a few sentences and have a new idea put into their head to fantasize about. Mariner77 honestly should try to write a book about whatever subject they please, so they can finally let out their writing ambition as much as they want with no limits. And in my opinion try to keep the submissions to this blog a tiny bit more compact.
Again, I don’t mean to be rude. But this has become very noticable to me lately, and I hope some people who read this comment can grow from this feedback. And I absolutely want Mariner77 to continue submitting.
I couldn’t disagree more with Anon.
Naked girls describing their extreme desire to expose their body parts are some of my absolute favorite captions, and “reading about women who act like their only goal in life is for people to see every wrinkle of their vulva” is why I finally created an account to participate in this community instead of just lurking.
Unfortunately I’m not able to use Discord currently but if I could speak to Mariner77 directly I would implore him or her to double down on the “absurdity” because some of us love it very much, and would hate for it to stop just because someone felt the need to complain.
As far as I know, Mariner77 isn’t on Discord either.
Aw, well if Mariner77 is reading the replies here then I hope he or she knows how much I enjoy those so-called crazy captions and, as someone who has very lewd exhibitionist fantasies of her own, I hope to see more of them. ❤
I am not on Discord. Thanks for the comments, especially the positive ones. I know that some of the text is often very long but it is only because there is too much to say. I try to keep it short but it gets away from me. I know that the quality of my submissions varies, but I do try. I will continue to submit what I feel I should whether it is absurd or not, if you don’t like it ignore it. I don’t think the model always has to mention their nudity. If they don’t say they are PN just assume they are.
I feel like it should relate to nudity at least in a subtle manner. The idea of not acknowledging it has merit in that it creates the fantasy of this being a normal everyday thing. But it can’t be irrelevant thematically. But there has to be a sense that the nudity makes the story being told different.
Like maybe this could have been about a registered girl who’s longing for a sense of normalcy despite her voluntarily flouting social norms. She doesn’t have to say it explicitly, but it could be clear that it is what’s going on.
Is not the goal of PN to become a society that nudity is common and no longer a topic of conversation? I believe this caption brings that part of the PN-universe alive. Admittedly, replace the good looking model with an ogre, and my opinion would flip in a heartbeat.
Shouldn’t there be people in teh PN-universe who simply go about their daily lives, but simply without clothing? Not a big deal to them. They are naked, but life continues.
As to the length, NWO used to have stories without images posted now and then. Some quite enjoyable from the standpoint of letting the mind create the images for each individual reader.
I don’t think I ever had stories without images, actually, but I did some with a single image “to set the scene” and significantly more text than would fit in a caption.
I might be thinking of CMNF-ENF rather than here.
I actually really like it. I think for newbies they’d talk about being naked all the time, but for people who are actually permanently naked, it’s just another day. They couldn’t possibly just constantly talk about being naked all the time, could they?
I think it makes the world more fun and believable, and hope to see more!
I read the caption before seeing any of the comments and the way I’d interpreted it was seeing her naked now and looking back at what’s changed I took “my past” as implying a “clothed” past which is fast disappearing since she registered. For me, the protagonist doesn’t always have to say “Hey, I’m naked. Zooming in on her breasts and lady garden before I started to read the caption told me that already.
If the caption doesn’t say anything about the girl’s nudity and her nudity isn’t even mentioned, then the girl’s nudity is kind of…pointless. It would have the same meaning if it was just a regular clothed girl. Captions like that just aren’t very interesting to me. It’s like when you read a story about a naked girl, but the text never elaborates on the sensation that she has in being naked, like the ground or floor on her bare feet, the wind on her butt, how noticeably her boobs bounce, how her nipples go hard at the most inopportune times, etc. Nor does it say anything about how other people react to her nudity. It’s so bland and banal that the character might as well not be naked in the first place.
I have to completely disagree with TLNC. I love these sort of captions where the nudity is there but not specified – you get to use your imagination to build out the story of why they are naked. The exhibitionist screaming look at me (like the recent “Amusement Park 1” http://nudeworldorder.net/blog/31164 /) and the detailed anatomical descriptions are the captions that I enjoy the least, to me they are the boring ones.
For me the best captions are the ones that give you a starting point for you to construct your own fantasy on top of.
I like the variety that the site seems to offer at the moment.