I submitted a rewrite for this one, since it’s definitely poorly written. Hopefully it will get published soon. Sorry to anyone who has developed a headache trying to figure out what’s going on in this post 🙂
It’s not the clearest. I think the gist of what it’s saying is that if you’re not brave enough to tell your family you want to be PN, you might try practicing in private first. … But make sure you can hear your family coming, which I assume this young lady just failed to consider.
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I submitted a rewrite for this one, since it’s definitely poorly written. Hopefully it will get published soon. Sorry to anyone who has developed a headache trying to figure out what’s going on in this post 🙂
Done. And thanks, it’s much clearer what’s going on now.
It would make a little more sense with a comma after tell.
To be honest, the word “tell” shouldn’t even be in there. Guess I made this one with a little too much alcohol in my system LOL
Am I the only one who is having a hard time understanding what this is about? The grammar is horrible. Sorry, just confused.
It’s not the clearest. I think the gist of what it’s saying is that if you’re not brave enough to tell your family you want to be PN, you might try practicing in private first. … But make sure you can hear your family coming, which I assume this young lady just failed to consider.