When the bar across town featured waitresses in lingerie, Cheryl knew what she had to do to get business back for her parent’s bar. At first she was uneasy, but soon she enjoyed the freedom and the longing looks from the guys. When other PN’s began showing up, the bar was packed most nights.
She’s beautiful and it’s a great story.
Same narrative, but change “bar” to “restaurant” and it would be 100x better.
When the bar across town featured waitresses in lingerie, Cheryl knew what she had to do to get business back for her parent’s bar. At first she was uneasy, but soon she enjoyed the freedom and the longing looks from the guys. When other PN’s began showing up, the bar was packed most nights.