Interesting artwork and concept. I am looking forward to seeing more. But I must suggest that you have the text portion of your submission proofread and edited by someone else. I am sorry to say the grammar is poor. Perhaps English is not your first language? If you can’t find anyone to edit maybe I can help. The NWO host has my email and if he is willing, he can forward your submissions to me for editing.
Interesting artwork and concept. I am looking forward to seeing more. But I must suggest that you have the text portion of your submission proofread and edited by someone else. I am sorry to say the grammar is poor. Perhaps English is not your first language? If you can’t find anyone to edit maybe I can help. The NWO host has my email and if he is willing, he can forward your submissions to me for editing.
My english is indeed very poor so it would be nice to have your help so that everyone can enjoy it more.
If you’re wondering, I already have material for about 5 parts, but for now I’m waiting for feedback.