Maybe it’s because when I make captions myself I get quite OCD about keeping the writing off the naked people but I feel like I really want to get hold of this and tidy it up.
I’m not too bothered by the placement of the words themselves – they don’t cover any of the fun bits so it’s fine by me. But it’s fairly obvious that English isn’t our submitter’s native language. The blue paragraph, in particular, is difficult to parse out.
However, I don’t want to be too rough on the submitter. English is my first language and I don’t know how to do this in it, let alone in a foreign one.
Maybe it’s because when I make captions myself I get quite OCD about keeping the writing off the naked people but I feel like I really want to get hold of this and tidy it up.
I’m not too bothered by the placement of the words themselves – they don’t cover any of the fun bits so it’s fine by me. But it’s fairly obvious that English isn’t our submitter’s native language. The blue paragraph, in particular, is difficult to parse out.
However, I don’t want to be too rough on the submitter. English is my first language and I don’t know how to do this in it, let alone in a foreign one.
John misreading the mood of the girls jumped into the pool and yelled, “Marco!”
The girls shook their heads and pulled their bikinis back on.